I was a student at Awahono School in Greymouth and this is where I shared my learning.
Hey CobyI like how you have put your picture that you have drawn. I think it is good how who kept your private information to yourself. I am looking forward to see more of your learning! Remember to put capitals on names!From Noah
Hey Noah thank you for the good feed back.from your friend Coby
Hi Coby, it's Ben here. I really like how you have keep all your private information to yourself. You need to edit Blakes name and put a capital.
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Hey Coby
ReplyDeleteI like how you have put your picture that you have drawn. I think it is good how who kept your private information to yourself. I am looking forward to see more of your learning! Remember to put capitals on names!
From Noah
Hey Noah thank you for the good feed back.
Deletefrom your friend Coby
Hi Coby, it's Ben here. I really like how you have keep all your private information to yourself. You need to edit Blakes name and put a capital.
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